Consider this statement about reading habits:
“Ten years ago, one out of every ten children read a book every day. Today the situation has improved because only one out of every eight children reads a book every day. Our goal is for \(5\%\) of children to read a book every day again soon.”
Explain why the statement is illogical. Then revise it so that it describes a real improvement and a reasonable goal.
Hints
- Find the percents for one out of every ten and one out of every eight.
- Does a larger portion represent an improvement in this situation?
- Is a goal of \(5\%\) higher or lower than the current value?
Solution
1. One out of every ten is \(\frac{1}{10} = 10\%\). One out of every eight is \(\frac{1}{8} = 12.5\%\).
2. An increase from \(10\%\) to \(12.5\%\) is an improvement, but the word “only” suggests a decrease.
3. A goal of \(5\%\) is lower than both \(10\%\) and \(12.5\%\), so it would not represent improvement. The word “again” also conflicts with the earlier value of \(10\%\).
4. One possible revision is: “Ten years ago, one out of every ten children, or \(10\%\), read a book every day. Today the situation has improved because one out of every eight children, or \(12.5\%\), reads a book every day. Our goal is for one out of every five children, or \(20\%\), to read a book every day.”
Answer
The statement is illogical because one out of every eight, or \(12.5\%\), is greater than one out of every ten, or \(10\%\), so “only” does not fit. Also, a goal of \(5\%\) would be lower than both earlier values.
Revised statement: “Ten years ago, one out of every ten children, or \(10\%\), read a book every day. Today the situation has improved because one out of every eight children, or \(12.5\%\), reads a book every day. Our goal is for one out of every five children, or \(20\%\), to read a book every day.”